Content / Idea; eye catching eye popping and I can’t look away Design: this is a great beginning, The basic design is very good but needs work - but a little tooo open - this could have been because of the colour and the negative space around the objects. They seem to be just plopped in the space. The bottom section of the text works graphically with the color behind the text - the they start to work as lines not just text as information – possible texture. There needs to be a bit better interaction between the object that can be gained by color – complimentary colors and repetition. Higher contrast. Size is important I gray color may be warm colors come forward – value needs to be pushed. Good job! Make the text bigger, add repetition and also increase the size of the picture in the main area. The arrows do not want to become too distracting make sure they are a different shape. The use of cold color needs to be pushed using contrast.
Content / Idea; eye catching eye popping and I can’t look away
ReplyDeleteDesign: this is a great beginning, The basic design is very good but needs work - but a little tooo open - this could have been because of the colour and the negative space around the objects. They seem to be just plopped in the space. The bottom section of the text works graphically with the color behind the text - the they start to work as lines not just text as information – possible texture. There needs to be a bit better interaction between the object that can be gained by color – complimentary colors and repetition. Higher contrast. Size is important I gray color may be warm colors come forward – value needs to be pushed. Good job! Make the text bigger, add repetition and also increase the size of the picture in the main area. The arrows do not want to become too distracting make sure they are a different shape. The use of cold color needs to be pushed using contrast.